Sarah S. & Isabella S.
November 30, 2011
Period 2
Narrator Project
Thanksgiving Dinner
First Person Narration from Melissa’s Point of View
I’m so happy to see my sisters today. They are just so wonderful. I don’t get to see them often so I’m really glad there here today with all of Byron's family. Aw look at little Bruce, I think he wants a bottle right now. “Hey Byron could you make Brucie a bottle please?” yeah,”said Byron.
Man all that food really looks good right now. Hm i wonder what I’m going to get. “Aye Melissa! Hola ninas.” said Byron's tia. “Hola” said all of us. “Are you girls ready to eat?” We all looked at each other and shyly said yes. Man i filled my plate with all this good amazing food. Turkey, potatoes, potato salad, salad, bread, pie, and more stuff. Bella had the same. However Sarah put more turkey on her plate along with a big
leg. My baby Brucie was having a good time and so was everyone else. Before we ate we all went around saying what we were thankful for. I said i was thankful for having my two only sisters Sarah and Bella here today and having my baby and boyfriend here as well. I’m happy they are all happy and healthy and full of joy as well. My sisters where also thankful for having a family together for such a thankful holiday. The night was all laughter and fun, until the staff called for my sisters to go. Just before they left they filled a plate with dessert and all these good foods i cant eat anymore. Aha that’s what happens after you have a baby. Everyone said their goodbyes and my sisters said how much fun they had had. “I’ll see you next Saturday you guys”! said Melissa. “Cant wait”. “Love you all and adios” said Bella and Sarah.
Third Person Narration
Isabella and Sarah were so excited to actually spend time with family. Their sister’s boyfriend’s family made the most amazing food they could ever imagine. It went from turkey to carne asada tacos. It was what a Thanksgiving should really be. None of them could wait to dig right in. Besides the food Sarah and Isabella were also happy to see their sister again. She’s practically the only family they have, so what else could be the best day of your life then to be with family and have incredible food. Isabella and Sarah had a very thankful Thanksgiving Day.
Narrator Expository Paragraph
A narrator can influence how much a reader understands the text.
For example, in first-person narration the narrator uses the pronoun “I” which makes the reader understand who is talking. --But in third-person limited/omniscient narration the narrator writes about the characters thoughts. --The difference is you get to read the different points of views as being the reader or character --The third-person limited narrator/omniscient is more credible because it has more emotion and thoughts, and by that it’s kind of as if you are the character’s mind. Closing Sentence: --Many reader enjoy reading stories written using first person narration because its more enjoyable to hear the characters in the story talk than rather have the boring narrator talk. You would want to read about their feelings and about how exciting the story really is..
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